Quiet Poetry Lounge : Didn't You Know...?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jul 7, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You don't know I
    do know you
    thought I think
    about why you
    gridlocked me into
    grief I really think
    rather well when
    you thought "we"
    were impossible
    to love and just
    believe You took
    your love from me
    and I continued
    to give it anyway
    There was nothing
    more to say You
    just laughed and
    turned away We
    never talked much
    after that You wouldn't
    see me I refused to
    see you We left off
    where we never started
    No Love Lost
    Wouldn't want it any
    other way ...

    ~Didn't You Know...? ~

    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE....
    melancholy almost....

    blak
    verb
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Why ~ thank you! Do you have anything that you see in this piece that you could critique on this piece ???

    Would definitely appreciate it!

    One.
     
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