Black Poetry : didnt u know? (a player tells the truth)

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i tried to explain that i couldn't live up
    to this big idea that you wouldn't give up
    i'm not saying i'm only human
    just that i'm only me
    and i can love you to the death
    but never selflessly
    i need
    all the time
    it's not fair
    so i dont ask
    i can love and protect you to the fullest
    but i will always put you last
    i can't give you more than that
    i'll always be looking for the better deal
    i won't hide it or be discreet
    because i do care how you feel
    i'll keep it real
    i'm only using you for this hole
    that exists inside
    but a bottomless pit
    can't be satisfied
    didnt u know?
    people change
    life molds us all in a new way
    i was perfect ten years ago;
    that's not me today.
    i'm spoiled
    i'm mean
    i'm abusive
    i'm cruel
    can you honestly still love me?
    are you that big a fool?
    i'm telling you leave.
    i'm letting you go.
    if you get hurt after this-
    don't be surprised.
    i've let you know.
    --peacebeme MsDy
    (copywrite protected 2004/all rights reserved to aisiah l williams)
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woah that was niiiice
    Tellin' the truth all the way
    Nice sistah :toast:
     
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    This gets your attention, the ugly truth is better than a pretty lie. Keep flowing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up the truth spoken over the nasty lie
    flow on
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Dynasty 1979 :wave: ...
    Welcome to "HOME" here
    I enjoyed that piece and I have great respect for the player...infact ...he/she is realer than the "real ones who plays. thanks for sharing such and insightful poem.
     
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    :flamet: OH BOI, this was tyte, I likes this drop,
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we don't wanna hear...
    def' refuse to see it...
    love the way you sculpted
    this in all it's rawness of truth...
    that's what makes it quite unique...
    and a perfect piece...

    this was tyte...
     
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