Black Poetry : DIDN’T RESPOND TO MINE HERE YOU GO TURKEY

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIDN’T RESPOND TO MINE HERE YOU GO TURKEY

    Yo flow silly with no ability no harmony in your army facility
    Even with political right you still not critical or tight with agility
    In debates you don’t see straight like blind mice your
    Rhymes diced up like potato salad say what you nice and hardcore?
    You loco couldn’t be gun ho holding an M16 just a retard whore
    A cruel soul with dual role your fuel hold sludge no spark
    You don’t flow art you best grow smart and quit just a low fart
    I’m aggressive with elimination you not an impressive demonstration
    You failed the test how can you prevail the best? needs renovation
    Like dilapidated buildings **** bricks are sick no foundation
     
  2. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MadRapper....

    Come on, bruh. Don't waste your time on writing poetry addressing folks on the site. That's not necessary. Stick to what you do. Share the knowledge of your hood...your streets...with the site. Never stop doing that. But, calling folks out in your poetry on this site....smh.

    I may be wrong...but that's what it seems like you're doing.

    peace
     
  3. angelicsage

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    Madrapper,

    First and foremost, this isn’t just any “site” it is an online community, a family if you will. Unfortunately, it seems you don’t understand this concept and consistently resist the culture to which we maintain here. I do know that you have been previously warned regarding personal attacks on fellow members, and I would like for you to consider this #2.

    At this point, if you are so unhappy here, why do you remain?

    Feeding this toxicity into our community will not be tolerated much longer.

    Have you considered that, the negativity that is emanated from threads such as this is the reason that members may not feel comfortable in replying to you? Also, it is not a “rule” that members reply to your work although we highly encourage showing love to one another by taking the time to read others.

    What you give, you will receive…think about it.

    AngelicSage
     
  4. Khasm13

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    i'll respond bacon...

    i'm glad you got finally got some balls to open up ya silly jaws
    cause this forum calls for important announcments in poetry mess halls
    your ish aint unique like pink taj mahals...matta fact
    my critique of the ish you speak is that you are weak like white crime laws
    and before you call someone a retard whore
    you need to remove your flows horrible stink, rethink and pause
    your ish aint poetry...and your rhyme style is a bore
    your probably a 5'7" white cat still tryin to score
    cause all the @ss you talking about getting is just another metaphor
    YOU HARDLY GIVE LOVE AND STILL YOU EXPECT MORE?
    wanna be hardcore simp you make my eyes sore
    and your basic rhymes make my teeth grind every time...to bad YOUR
    too blind to get with the love we tried to show ya mind...your kind
    is a selfish self-centered type that won't be remembered...cause you've never said anything hype
    and you had the nerve to say your wordz some catz bite? *laughing*
    they were probably wack if they did
    check no rep...cause thas all for you kid

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm13 YOU'RE WHITE BECAUSE YOU WOULD KNOW THAT EMINEN IS TH ONLY WHITEBOY THAT CAN MUTLI-RHYME WITH ANY CONSISTANCY SO HERE YOU GO WHITE GIRL

    you get responses on the work-site because you skirt-tight you spit wrong-prose- stats-trash just a white girl with a long-nose-and-flat-*** your rhymes are a stale- blend like pale-skin you better tan down
     
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    check da back porch for the source if you didn't feel remorse
    afta snatch'n love with smelly rhymes like horse
    manure...then change your maneuvers
    or get smashed like a 18-wheeler up against a scooter...
    you really need a concept tutor...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Brotha Madd...if I may humbly request a moment with the man behind the rhymes...

    It would seem that you write to seek an audience and obviously thas all good and said. I would hate to think that you couldnt share here brotha but perhaps the problem isnt as simple as no one trying to reply...perhaps...jus maybe...if you were to pause and evaluate the board schematics you would see that there is an equation to the Love we have developed here. You will receive what you give brotha...its really that simple. In all honesty brotha...I would like to think that you are betta than resorting to a accusatory tone intended towards those who choose to simply...

    Give back to you what you have given to them...

    But to each his/her own my brotha...
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well that's the way it is yo the truth can hurt a little
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the truth will set you free...
    check da dialec...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    and what does this have to do with the price of tea in china? :help:
    one love
    khasm
     
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