Black Haiku : did you hear what I said?

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****! Would you get the hell away from me.

    (I wish I meant it!)

    When I told you to get out of my life but I really wanted you to stay.
    I wish meant it when I told you I wished you were dead and all the while I couldn’t imagine living without you.

    (I said it but did I mean it.)


    Those nights that I hung the phone up in your face I curled up to aching pain in stomach that cried our for you to rub me so gently.

    When I said I was out with someone else, I knew I sitting in the theater all alone hoping I wouldn’t bump into anyone who would tell you they saw me alone. I wish I meant it.

    **** it!
    I hate your ***!
    You make me sick!
    I hate the day I met you and your no good Mamma!
    Why don’t you just leave me the hell alone!
    I can do bad all by myself!
    I don’t need yo’ stank ***!
    I never loved you anyway!
    Get the hell out!
    Take your sh*& with you!
    I can’t stand your ***!

    (I said it but did I mean it?)

    I miss you!!
    ****! I still love you too!
     
  2. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been there...

    get out of my head!
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight scribe poet...truer words than many are willing to admit...

    a must read

    one.
     
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    I heard ya!

    I've felt this before.
    man you hitt'n corners on
    this bruh!
    Nice piece!:)
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd Sistahly Love

    The words one hastens to say during emotionally upsets. Fully feeling this scribe.

    Poetically Turn'd Out
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't know how i miss the punch line tyte write bruh !
     
  7. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew its been a helluva day, i know :happens:
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece was a blast from the past causes you to remember those long days.
    nice drop.
     
  9. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep and long night too soulja!

    Preach(klabarron)
     
  10. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was something else! i know i've felt this way before, telling the dude to go when i really want him to stay but wishing that i really meant for him to go! you read my mind. lot's of love!
     
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