Black Poetry : DID I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Jul 19, 2006.

  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for reading while it was posted
     
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    Did I not play wifey the way you like
    Did I not cater to your every need
    Did I not give you all that I had to give
    Did I not conform to your expectations
    Did I not change inside and out for you
    Did I not lose me inside your idea of me

    Yet it did not completely satisfy you
    Yet it did not keep you home at night
    Yet it did not make you love me right
    Yet it did not make you faitful and true
    Yet it did not commit you totally to me
    Yet it did not make us happily ever after


    Definitely have been in the situation where I did what i had to do and it still wasn't enough. Excellent flo cuz.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply felt
    if i can only change the maze
    i would cater to your needs
    be the man to please
    shower u in compassion
    make it be everlasting

    feeling you on this fo real been there my self just twisted around
     
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    Really feeln' this drop. flo on poet
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear friend, I have been, in this position
    til one night, the Lord brought me a vision
    for the man I onced loved, you see
    Had assasinated me, verbally; emotionaly

    I overcompensated, jumped hoops, still defeated
    He would sex my body, and leave my mind so depleted
    The Lord made it so, I had no choice, but to go
    gave us time, seperated, so that we could grow.

    Two years went by, he called me, we got back together
    Untrusting at first, the Lord suficed me, during the stormy weather
    "Don't know a good thing, til' it's gone, now thats fact
    Keep workin on you, sweeteee, bet he'll come runnin' back
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...

    Beautiful flow, sweettee29, and nice flowback asimplepoet:spinstar:

    :picture:
     
  7. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ASIMPLEPOET LOVED YOUR FLO AND YOUR WORDS MUCH LOVE

    RICH LOVE AS USUAL THANK YOU, YOU ALWAYS KNOW JUST WHAT TO SAY

    4EVERLOVE THANKYOU AS WELL I APPRECIATE ALL YOUR SUPPORT

    AND MRS SWEET APPLE PIE MAN THOSE WORDS COULD NOT HAVE BEEN TRUER AND THATS REAL THANK YOU

    SPICEB THANKYOU GIRL MUCH MUCH LOVE

     
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    likewise sis likewise dear