Black Poetry : Did I Miss Something!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe it's this strange hormonal flow
    that I am in.
    Maybe it's the web of seduction that you
    spin
    Maybe it's just the time that we don't have
    to spend.
    Maybe it's cause you are still so new to me
    my friend.

    Did I miss something?
    Did I forget to say how much I adore
    the way you smile at me?
    Did I forget to say , sorry I am bitchy
    sometimes?
    Did I miss something that you needed
    me to see, so busy trying to get a lil
    something for me?
    Did I?

    If I haven't said I think that you are more
    than just a handsome face, well , YOU ARE!
    If I haven't said honestly and truthfully you
    are NOT the only man in my life, but I wish
    you were.
    THEN I DO SO NOW!
    Will I ever change the way I feel about you , and
    doubt you, want to be without you?
    I don't know
    But for right now...
    I just miss you... All the T-I-M-E , TIME
    DID I MISS SOMETHING?
    BJS (C)2002
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truth was spoken here, "Idon't know"
    and their is nothing wrong with the right now.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i cannot say
    but i do know
    i love da flow
    i wanna know u a bit mo!!!!!
    dis piece speak loud & clear
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very enjoyable read.
    Thanks for sharing. :)

    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girlfriend

    two snaps and atwist
    I do belive you got this thing down......Get out of my hed and stop speaking my heart !
    been there
    done that
    go head on wich yo bad self :x:
     
  6. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you didn't speak it i would still remember...
    this is a nice reminder for the brotha.


    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i lovedided this sh*t here

    *****
    five star production
    and MAAAAADDDDD flava
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAYUMMM! Y'ALL LIKED IT!

    Thank you for the wonderful response, I pondered over
    speaking such thoughts on paper.
    But, somethings just have to be said.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE
    AND MSB IS BACK IN FULL AFFECT!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not at all my dear -not at all. scribe on.
     
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