Black Poetry : Did I do that? The Fool A.K.A. “THE NAMELESS ONE”...Continued...

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seeing you crystallized in thought I wish to set you free,
    Except, there’s no need, for your existence is in Eternity.
    Imprisoned aloft in your ivory tower,
    By the chosen word of the hour
    But prophetic WORD sets you free
    Free throughout all eternity.
    Like the cloth that can't be worn to shreds
    You will exist while all else is dead
    Yet still weaving the web of life
    But not caught in it, THAT - is your might!
    Akin to the fool
    Unchained by a rule
    Unaware of his true name
    Dressed as a king yet not the same
    But there comes a question
    And then the direction
    Like the butterfly from the cocoon
    Or the flower as it is to bloom
    " Who am I? ",
    " I did not die,
    in that gentle goodnight,
    but reborn here in the light ".
    " I am destiny in motion "
    " No more a twig in the ocean "
    " Do not call me this, do not call me that "
    " I will be what I will be, and that is a fact "
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece like always dont know why everyones sleepin

    uppin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth flow ......dis was tyght vibing !
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always.....
    thankx lpoet and Rich..........
     
  5. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I especially liked your last line. :)
     
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