Black Poetry : Diary Page.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 6, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He knows me….
    Like a page out my diary
    He reads me so well
    He runs through my pages
    and mends all that is wrong….
    Protector of my heart
    As if he knew me long ago
    Like my dairy
    He knows of my dreams
    My smiles and my worries
    He knows my secrets
    Feels my pain
    And protects them all
    He rewrites my history
    Takes my past and heals the pain
    Reaching into my soul
    As my spirit cries of joy
    Releasing my happiness
    As he.....
    Wraps his warmth around me
    Takes my heart and covers it
    With his passion
    As our spirits interlace
    In the heavens night above
    Upon a cloud in the orbs
    Extending his hand…
    He reads me so well
    Like a page out my diary

    (C) 2004
    BlkAngel

     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so sweet and beautifully laid out
    another page out da Diary .....flow on sis.
     
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    Loving this drop!!!!!
    Absolutely Beautiful!!!!

    Keep it flowing Sis!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a lovely drop, very serene.
     
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    I likes it.

    Sweet laced poem Angel, I guess U on some alecia key's stuff....LOL
     
  6. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such intiamacy shared is rare and unique
    Like each personal page out ya dairy,
    These eyez see the beauty you describe
    vibe on
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I neva really had a daily diary so much as i had a journal and a scrapbook....well ONE time i had a diary smh...gurllll if the brotha i was datin at the time knew me like the pages in the diary smh i would be :eeek: lol but the idea that two minds can be so insync...great :)
     
  8. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When reading it...

    I see a girl full of desire,passion,luv...i see a deep girl.I can understand how much ur luv can be great,how much ur friendship can be sweet.Keep the flow comin' sis...i like ur style
     
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