Black Poetry : DIARY OF AN ANGRY BLACKMAN

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  1. Poeticvibez

    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    I want you to hear the words from the torn pages of a mans diary
    Mr. 12 play said it takes one man to make one women hate all men
    Let me ask you then
    How many women does it take to make that one man hate all women
    These aren't stories from an angry black man
    These are from the I don't get no slack man and All I receive is flack man Cause she cant get over the experience from that man
    It was like I was in a revelation
    I stepped in on a four way conversation
    This is reality not some mans imagination
    As four vents vent their frustration
    Names will not be stated
    They will be named him, he, I, and we
    First sip taken
    This is six years in the making
    Not like one day he awakened and asked her to marry him
    Told her that her parents know
    With family and friends around
    He reached deep deep deep into his soul on his knees while fought to keep control
    Just to hear the answer NO
    She grabbed his heart out his chest
    No shovel buried six feet deep laid to rest
    Said she done moved on to the next
    Second glass for the buzz cause he wants to know why
    Why don't we see when she's lying
    Cant you see how she sent his love flying
    Made his real love feel like it wasn't genuine
    Sad how he had to hear it from the next man
    How she was dropping the missing sex on the next man
    Right to left man
    He even found out that she was banging the FedX man
    Now he knows why his packages were always on time
    Now you on drink three to ice cubes close to being tipsy
    Best man found the hidden tapes
    In it she was gripping the headboards with her legs splited
    She didn't even hide her face in it
    The truth was to hard to take
    Without haste he shattered the tape
    Did it without looking
    Wasn't going to be the one to commit a crime of passion
    Wasn't going to be the one tooken by some action like taping
    Afraid what viewing would awaken
    His hearts breaking cause he asked her and when she answered
    He could see that her I love You’s were vacant
    Fourth glass got you inebriated
    Drunk his voice elevated
    Said with tears spraying she wasn't playing me
    Even if the chick that I did see on the street look just like the love that I call my sweet
    Plus she cant play a player but
    player must have been played
    Or in the wrong game cause the loss was shinning in his eyes
    Pupils a screen screaming how she played me
    So ladys when he takes you out then
    Back to the crib he bangs your back out to the point that you pass out
    Tomorrow morning its get your *** out
    Why
    Cause It takes one man to make one women hate all men
    So she then ends up hurting that good man as bad as she can
    Now that one man hates all women
    And the cycle begins again :flamet: :flamet:
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com

    Thanks for sharing this piece poet.
     
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    Brother, welcome to the spot where it's all good.

    Speak you mind and get things off you chest in a family atmosphere.

    An exchange of ideas is good for the soul!
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I loved your work...it spoke volumes...but as I always say; "THERE'S A DISTINCTION BETWEEN A BLACK MAN AND A BLACK MALE". Just something to think about.

    Peace !!!
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    to keep flowing , sharing and hit a few poet's
    poetic pieces this was awesome welcome within !
     
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    Welcome to destee.com
    love this vibe release your mind
    nice work here looking for more

    come chack us out in voice chat
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  7. Poeticvibez

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    Thanx

    As soon as I am able to take care of that fee ill be there.Until then i do appreciate the luv.
     
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    Yo, dog, that was dope (my Randy Jackson from Amer. Idol impersonation).

    But really though, this is a vicious cycle that must be broken.

    Really nice & on hit.

    Peace.
     
  9. Poeticvibez

    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    The cycle will be changed once we acknowledge the problem
     
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