Quiet Poetry Lounge : DIARY...(another chapter pg.III

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I saw your sweet shyness upon our exsistance

    that forever presented smile, I knew was sincere
    I basked in da love you gave me so true
    my eyes beheld in miracles i saw deep in you

    I heard your sweet soft voice in melodies of keys
    the one i heard best was the key note just for me
    the sound of your steps as you enter my space
    made me feel complete and warmth my heart trace

    I still smell the beautiful fragrances that remind me of you
    all the great things your heart allowed to shine through
    the sweat on your body after a long tough day
    then da sweet clean smell after you showered it away
    makes me wanna caress and comfort as we lay

    I touch you with love, from my heart i ever knew
    I touch you with warmth and passion so humblely new
    I touch you wit grace for what has taken place we stew
    even touch you wit hope as our love blossom and grew
    there's no other who can compose what you do

    I still taste da sweet pleasures we so eagerly spent
    the taste was like sugar that i will never relent
    for now in prayer as our souls behold to repent
    so to you my belove this letter my heart has sent

    You fill my soul's cellar with memories so rare
    may each day transition be delighted and just as fair
    and note upon da song for my love truely care
    in my heart we will entwined near or far this i bare
    for there's an forever embrace my spirit will wear

    Forget me not for i will alwayz be there
    no matter where we end moments i knew we share
    you the blessing to my center and deepest of core
    I never thought this would be until you open da door

    Now i hang from the ledge wit feeling of never before
    our friendship so speical my love begin to pour
    I am no more then your liquid lava for you to explore
    I'll never leave you for you means so much more

    Holding you tight in my mind upon my slumber
    within my chambers you sit in cascading smiles
    until we bloom from our cocoon to light
    I will put up this battle of love's fight
    I want give up nor give in ,I'll be here to da very end
     
  2. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To love in this way is truly a Godsend.
    You express the emotions of love's sentiment so well, your $RICHNESS$.


    epiphany:heart:
     
  3. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Rich, don't ever perform this piece on stage!

    This kinda stuff will gitcha STALKED! lol

    Seriously, this is that "Yes, Big Daddy!" kinda sweet talkin!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hey sister Epiphany thank you !

    sister Cherryblossom you know i plan to do that in open mic so let da stalking begin ....lol
    Thank you very much sis
     
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