Black Poetry : ~diamondcrystals~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 24, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply
    Undefined
    Suppressed
    Uttered in a tongue
    Unknown
    Linger on
    These visions
    To a world
    So cold

    Fatigueed
    To rewards
    Not fully circum
    Elated or
    Magistrated
    Affiliated

    Yet failing
    To progess

    In it
    Dialated
    And fabricated
    My heart
    & Soul

    Circumfrenced with
    Breathing

    Reason
    Vision
    Maybe I was a mistake
    On this earth
    Unheard
    Yet visible

    It's a challenge
    To go around it

    To walk over it
    Because I can't go over it

    It can't go in it
    Or through it

    I must discover new realms
    A word indicated
    My words are leading no where

    I end up at a dead rode
    How did I get so jumbled up ?
    Mixed up ?
    And confused ?

    To say the things that I really want to say
    To hear the things that I really want to hear

    FEAR

    Though diamondcrystals
    Priceless
    Hidden inside of me

    No one knows
    It's me

    And I cry
    And I cry
    And I cry

    Difficult to explain
    The reason why

    Nobody knows

    What I'm going through

    Deeply it hurts

    Intensified
    I groan and I yearn
    I moan and I worry
    I learn and I study
    I preocupy my time
    So I don't have to think about "it"

    Diamondcrystals
    I wish
    People could see it
    But it's not visible to the naked eyes
    Unless you have spiritual eyes

    It's not easily visited
    Unless you have spiritual ears to hear

    It's heard but
    It's a whipser
    Better yet inferred
    To me
    But the pictures not clear yet
    And as I grow it becomes clearer
    Still nobody can hear her
    Nobody can reach her
    While she's trembling
    Needlessly
    Belated
    Yet blatant
    Affected
    By my surroundings
    My world
    My atmosphere

    Still sincere

    Diamondcrystals
    Priceless
    But what do I have do
    To umm ,how should I say
    Gain some respect?

    That's all I'm asking for
    Unpleasantly loud
    I roar

    I laugh

    I cry

    I doubt

    I score

    I shout

    I see

    There

    Inside

    Of me

    For

    All

    The

    World

    To see

    Diamond Crystals

    Perfectly shining

    High beam

    Like a ray of life

    But blind are

    Their eyes

    Blind are their minds

    Blind is their intelligence

    Frivolous

    Unworthy
    They make it seem
    They ignore me
    Yet they keep me guessing
    And conjuring
    Reflects
    It overwhelming
    To be studied
    With eyes
    And to be synthesized
    Flip flop
    Props
    Terrible
    To be in the middle
    Prevoked
    Tossed to and fro
    Rocked back and forth

    I try
    I try
    I try

    To get away
    Yet my efforts are in vein
    Prevail
    In inhale
    Waiting to exhale
    Suffocating
    Just trying
    To matter
    Trying to look deeper
    Trying to mean more
    Is ideal
    But it isn't real

    My Diamondcrystals
    Need to be revealed

    Desert Storm
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gyrl....this is....

    To tyght for me! Go on in your particular shade of YOU girlfrynd!

    I likes this one DS...thank you for putting it out here
    for me to read!

    Much :heart:
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou

    Glad to see you,how you been? tight! hee hee hee, well,thanks for peeping this one. You are so gifted thanks for seeing this one.
    Desert Storm
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY.....

    let those diamondcrystals spill everywhere & continue

    to sprinkle us all with their brilliant bryght beauty! :)

    i loved this!! sparkle on lil' sis... sparkle on. :spinstar::spinstar:

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks sunshyne

    ...seems like a never ending battle. It's so very routine these days. Lawd,help me! Girl it's been rough thanks for responding I appreicate it
    Desert Storm
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm

    you betta keep blinding me with your diamondcrystals so I can keep wearing these shades. I likes yo style



    One :heart:
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh!,Thanks gurl

    Thanks so much,gurl,reaptively I say thankyou again and again. It get's lonely at times. But one kind word can shift the tide. Thanks so much. I appreciate it.
    Desert Storm
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm, I don't believe we've met ---

    but the pleasure is mine.
    I always thought you were a guy.

    man, I am mostly speechless right now...
    partly cuz I identified with this
    partly cuz i wonder what made you feel this way

    I have a lot of favorites here,
    you have joined the ranks w/ this single poem -
    I will be checking you out from now on.
    wow!
     
  9. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    relating and

    identifying with your scribe. I see you gyrl, I see you!;)
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can you hear that gurl? that's me clapping in the background...this piece is sooo tyght. keep on scribin', gurl.