Black Haiku : Diamond Vows

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  1. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hand in hand they strolled
    Their eyes told of love enduring
    Five decades strong
     
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    within love they vow
    so strong fifty years ago
    dat's true love today
     
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    and there is

    such a thing as love for life...it transcends the common place and has nothing to do with "convention". People who vow to love like this... live completely outside the box....

    this is what I feel, very deeply...

    thank you for this, Poetess

    alyce
     
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    Thank you Poet $$RICHNE$$; you always return the perfect reiteration.

    Thank you Poetess alyce; I could not have said it better myself. Convention not a factor, there really is true love and true soulmates for life. Outside the box they truly are. Thank you.
     
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