Black Poetry : Diamond Haze

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, May 5, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Empress
    Of the fire flies

    See how they light up?
    Drawn easily by the glare
    Of your eyes

    Inevitably
    Correct

    I see in the distant
    Something MADD~ly~
    Direct

    So I'm waiting
    To correct
    Dilect

    Paint a picture
    From the distant

    I see you coming
    I see you yearing

    But not yet ~BURNING~

    Read ya
    Everyday

    Thuggish
    Similiarities

    Some may not be
    Able to understand
    It

    But clarification
    Makes it definate

    Clearer
    Not straying
    Not a drifter

    Like Joseph
    And the coat
    Of many colors

    I wear it
    Throught the night

    Daydreams go by
    I see visions

    I am the moon
    And the stars
    Are all surrounding me
    Bowing down to me

    I told my older siblings
    But they defied me
    And try to rob me

    Through this
    I was sold into
    Slavery

    Yet bravery
    And honesty

    Became my destiny
    Diamond haze
    Became a name for me

    Diamond haze
    And MADD~ly~
    Footprints
    In the sand

    From across the ocean
    To the Carribean islands
    Islanders
    Become creative
    And writers
    Tend to behave
    As little
    Children

    In their minds
    They often seem to
    Captivate
    And imprison

    The very souls
    Of the readers
    Who dare to listen

    They pay attention
    To the collective thought

    That tends to wander
    And you have made
    Me dream
    And Diamond haze
    Is what I see.

    Desert Storm
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DS~

    OOOOOhhh girl, this is nice ~ definitely feelin' the flow...so you & MADD have some commonalities?! Go head on' sista-gurl!!

    Do ya' thang!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NOW I KNOW

    THE RAPPER IS MADD~ly
    IN AWEEE!!
    UNDERSTOODED AND THE SAME
    U GO GURL FLOW DES HEAH!!
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh, where is he??? he needs to read this heyah. gurl, now, you know, i'm lovin' it. the flo is just right on this piece. keep on keepin' on....
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Nsursoul, Rich,Listerscribin. Glad you feelin this vibe hea. WOw thanks y'all on da comment's Much love. Yall
    One
    Peace
    Desert Storm
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Piece

    This is nice..really nice. The small descriptions...it was just all good. I really liked this scribe...
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    storm..you bringing the heat again sis'

    keep em coming...
    :toast:
     
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