Black Short Stories : Devil's Playground...(Uncut pt. 5)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She spit in his face..."Get me the **** outta here u bastard!!" She yelled at the top of her lungs, her face covered in sweat. "Now, now Ms.Grayson, we don't have to get fiesty." He said, his own voice gettig low, as he pulled out a sharp *** eight inch knife/sword from his pocket and pointing it at her. "We REALLY don't have to get fiesty." he repeating brushing it against her skin. "Know let me tell u the ******* deal ****, u have been turned over by ur boss, to me to turn tricks cuz ur a ******* ***** that thinks yo **** don't stank, and has forgotten as it were, where u came from." "Your boss wants me to teach u a lesson." After this little speech he chuckled as if all was well with the world, and in his world, it probably was. In Janous's however, her's was just starting to fall apart. "Oh and whore, umm, see, i forgot to tell u, i u ever try to escape u will be gutted like a fish, by this."
    He pointed to the knife. "It does have ur name on it, anyway" He turned the blade over on its side, and sure enough, there in Italic's was Janus Grayson.

    What kind of sick bastard is this? she asked herself, her blood chilling....Was this a dream? She asked herself, looking around nervously, as three men came in. One held some clothes, (hers were all ripped) one held a shot, and one held a collar with sharp spikes pretruding out...What the **** has she gotten herself into?
    to be continued...

    (parts 1,2,3,4 are in the thread Devil's Playground....check it out if ur lost)
    -story
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh me oh my this was good girl:wink:
     
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    very nice ......
    this was da story indeed
    tone down the foulness
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry if it was to foul, rich i'll tone it down...
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    -story
     
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    Yo, you know this was tyte right. I was feeling it. two thumbs up and a pack of kool- aid for flava.
     
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