Black Poetry : Devil In Her(In Diguise)

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seductive intuitive stares him down with an initiative
    Involving mental fabrications of explicatives
    Once thought profane the reception was hotter than profane
    Embraced openly accepted loved passionately
    For killer looks and a cold personality….Irony
    For what was given wasn’t received
    As humans we all have needs
    We’re dealing with a dellusioned child who believes in illogical fallacies
    How such purity reside in thoughts of insanity
    But none the less the relationship no longer boarded sanity
    Love turned to hate crimes against love
    Heated words penetrated coldly no thoughts of the man above
    But one ought to question the boy’s ill state of mind
    For hated and loved at the same time
    So sporadic were the shots and motive
    Needless to say only God knows this
    But engulfed in flames the boy ceases to exalt his bride
    Bringing her down with hurtful lies born of his ignorance & pride
    Your only worthy of a man’s extortion a sample of what was said
    In the moment she said nothing but these words resided inside her head
    I control you I own you how ironic this was true
    But it wasn’t of the boy & his lady but of the dude
    The one called friend the real culprit the master of the arts
    From the heaven sent highs all the way back to the start
    Emancipated in hate so in conclusion here marks the introduction
    Of the affair of the boy with the Devil in Disguise
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    Nicely done.. I like how you how you dropped in and out of first person for these lines: "I control you I own you how ironic this was true"..

    that really put the cherry on top.


    Peace.
     
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    Da devil compose many faces
     
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