Black Poetry : Devil in a Red Dress

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She caught several men's eyes
    as they had a coke and smile at
    the neighborhood eatery where
    she parlays the day away;
    sure that she is the center
    of everyone's attraction…
    even a man of my quality

    Temptation, her middle name,
    was spelled across her forehead
    in beads of sweat that suggests
    that this one was too hot to handle…
    at least for some of the mellow brothas
    who brush away temptation with a
    quiet, casual gesture of two fingers

    I watched her sway her devilish
    hips in the incomparable red slinky
    dress which was only outdone by
    her slinkier disposition; ah yes,
    Lucifer incarnate she mos' def be

    You know the kind that drives men
    insane when we begin to exude
    confidence that things could be on
    like that in a tempting sort of way

    Moving like an African gazelle, she
    made her way to my table for one
    which quickly became her table for
    two; in search of an unknowing soul to
    hopefully steal with her cunning ways

    Hot to my imagined touch, she meant
    to burn me deeply with just her soulhungry
    stare; trying to penetrate my defenses
    to make the conquest of me, shall we say

    easier…

    Speaking softly but with forked tongue,
    she asked if I fancied her dress and in
    the same breath, inquired of my status…

    available or taken?

    Although entranced by her red dress,
    light-skinned complexion, and
    red lips, I answered…

    not available for you fire…

    fidelity is penicillin for the soul…

    (C) GQInc 2001
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    aaawwwww c'mon GQ ... you can tell us ...

    whatchall do ???!!! :wink:

    nice peace as always
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soulhungry

    for this here. Have I told you lately that I love the language you speak????




    One
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ

    man tell it !!
    I wanna know coz dis be woooweee!!
    i'm crazy for da color (RED):heart: :D
    tell it what ya do....???
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come on Now Ya'll!!!!!

    Mama D - :nono: A gentleman never tells.... :grin::angel1:
    Zorb - I speak dem words just fa u :heart:... :cool::hot:
    $R - Now you know I would handle my bizness no doubt!!! :flame::uzi::flamet:

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    gotz ta be careful...

    anything that hot gotz ta burn somp'em.:)

    you be smokin', Q.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    got to watch that

    GQ

    DSSNY

    feeling the quality
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go'on whicha bad self!!

    GQ.... you be da devil in red leather pants himself!! :lol:

    Love da scribe you present!

    N2
     
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