Black Poetry : Determination

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside da tranquility
    i'm determin to vow
    my heart and soul
    to unfold u don't have
    to speak a word for
    i see in ya eyes and
    fell it from ya emotions
    ya eyes hold secrets
    to all reality so i vow
    a determination
    it can't be done ova nite
    but we will accomplish
    da feat and possibility
    ur unhidden love spray
    out to canvas and the
    truth melts ova da land
    despite all da superficial
    nature u shine my dear
    and i so loveth u
    making limitation
    i determin light of hope
    and heart of a tropical
    rainbow to shower u in
    coz i'll forever be ya maze
    of love missing u wit dis
    burnning desire da vision
    is a mission of togetherness
    my mind sleeps in ya soul
    and my heart weaved in ya
    spirit of essence and i taste
    da orbs of ya love
    i lay in da rapture , captured
    humbled like a warm summer
    cascading in ya memories
    determin to be feeling u
    sweetly daily and praying
    for our undivine vows
    in tranquility :luvv: :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when determination hit flow wit it deeply
    coz da love can slip away vow ya heart
    and stay in it to win .............word up!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sound like a determined man flowing with a rainbow of warmth and strength. Very endearing heartfelt flow brotha.
     
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    this took me in and held me...i was on every word...
    vow of determination..it tells of a love that is growing strong
    with every measure..your leaving nothing unturn....
    but i love the flow it had deep meaning..:)

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    You are determined to allow you love to be in ...
    tranquility
    and in tranquility comes peace of mind
    that you may neva find
    anywhere else as TRUE
    as you may find in the heart that beats for you...
    word...i can dig it :read: :)
     
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    THANKZ WATZ it's a rebirth

    THANKZ ANGEL indeed da stronger the better and love cascade ova da land

    THANKZ TRINITI inside peace come unity & love and stronger hope for it's
    a determination of tranquility
     
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    Very powerful and determined write. Very nice.
     
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    indeed loving ya favor my brother!!!!
    your welcome
     
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    thankz poetrymama & angel
    for the lovin support
     
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    You just keep gettin better and better, $$RICH$$, which is hard to believe. This really shines.
     
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