Black Poetry : **~DETACHED~**

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Oct 12, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whooo Jesus, I'm not really sure
    I want to even wake up today.


    Eyes open....

    Erratic breathing now focused and
    under control....

    Push the covers back and get up....

    S***! Its time to face another day.

    I'm up, I'm doing the daily routine....
    In the bathroom, staring at my reflection
    no infection's just preening....

    Leave and walk outside into the pool we call life...
    full of...

    Fake smiles and too bright hello's, how are you's and its good to
    see you to's...it all boarders on the near hysterical and insane.

    But, I'm DETACHED from it all.
    Its like the clouded water of a no-name lake running down
    a ducks back.
    I'm here, but then again i'm not.

    I've attended the party,
    but i'm not apart of the party.
    Its a refined feeling of nonchalance better known as just good ole,
    plain DETACHMENT!

    Thats a better word to describe this
    warm, start-from-my-toes-and-move-up-
    until-i'm-lost-in-its throes feeling, i'm feeling.
    Baby, I'm DETACHED and thats the way I want to be
    today.
    I don't want to deal with anyones stupid a** s***!
    Oh! My bad, I meant to say deal with anyone's proverbial
    and oh-so-natural mess that occurs from day to day.

    I just want to exist and move through like a
    tortise through the waters.
    And this is exactly what I do.
    I live my life only pleasing God and loving myself...
    purposing within myself to exist in a near-permanent state of
    dégagé, being unattached, disemboweled or hell just purely...

    DETACHED.

    S***! Ya'll excuse me while I go drink some whiskey and rest my nerves!

    Peace and Soul.
    Breath Love and Be easy,
    ~PropheticNsyght
    copyright 2004
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whooo Jesus, I'm not really sure
    I want to even wake up today.

    ~PropheticNsyght
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love 1poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    silent prayer deep in slumber this tyte
     
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    ...poet u speak the sentiment
    of many hearts that roam through
    this life and this world of veils
    and frivolity...
    but you are blessed with the enlightenment
    of being grounded...in the one thing
    that keeps one sane...
    having communion with the source
    of your every breath...

    Still caught up on the Prophetic Flow,
    Sage
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much bruh rich! God bless
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma you are truly my heartfelt twin. Thank you so much for feeling me and keeping me encouraged in this craft. You are one of a kind! I love you ma and I thank you for your love and support.
    God bless you ma and I still want to do a collab with you; your choice of course *smile*
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I get an AMEN, because there are plenty of days I have felt like that. Walking in a world I'm not really a part of, yet playing the role. A sista just wants a peace of mind and to be left alone some days! Thank you for sharing this!
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amen this was hot for real kbut let me drop this jright here

    My team strives in competition and survives friction
    With live ammunition don’t listen to jive predictions
    Our flow smoke when provoked best yall duck down
    We blaze and take so don’t raise the stake you may lose clown
    But may die rude without a supply of food very lonely
    Being hungry so this thug today is headed to the Subway strongly