Black Poetry : destiny's v i s i o n(aBishop&CocoFusion)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I long to know you
    Find out who you really are
    She who has the skin of smooth cocobutter
    And lyrical rhymes
    That subtly invokes passion in man

    I long to know you
    Find out who you really are
    ...he
    who's light shine
    from the lighthouse
    and compose poetry
    that romantically tug the
    heartstrings of woman

    Your voice
    Washes over me like
    Gentle waves over Love’s Sea
    And I smell your essence in the nitewind

    ...your voice
    enters me like air
    brings life to my souldeep
    when I hear you speak

    Who are you?
    And have you come for me
    Or am I just a hopeless romantic
    Caught up in all that you are

    ...we sensed us
    before this lifetime
    our souls committed
    to for e v e r then

    ...we
    are intended
    soulmates

    ...I've come
    to you many moons
    and suns through night
    and dayd r e a m s

    ...we've
    exchanged our
    in tox i ca ting scents to
    reminisce after time spent

    You see I thank God that I found you
    And I will forever treat you like a lady
    For you are so beautiful
    And I just wanna know
    That when I dine at Love’s table
    Will it be a table for two?

    ...you see
    I thank God i found you
    and I will forever honor you
    for you are a g e n t l eman
    And I just want you to know
    I've seen destiny's vision
    of you/of me/of we-together
    indulging in us-e n d l e s s ly at
    love's table-our needs and wants
    were quenched a b s o l u t e ly

    You and I
    Forever and always
    It won’t end
    For this is my Lover’s Prayer
    To you
    All you have to do is say Amen…

    you and I
    in love-i n d e f i n i t e ly
    forever I say, "Amen"




    poetrysouldeep!
    Bishop&Coco :heart:


    copyright©2004
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Coco and Bishop this was just beautiful, is it a poetry vibe or is it a vibe of the soul, keep flowing.... Bravo....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!! y'all flowed it in da max
    lovin dis collab
    like to read more of y'all soon
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname... lets call it a "soulpoetryvibe" :)

    Rich... I must admit... Bishop can take it to the max!
    Hes great to work with...as are you :)

    Thank you both for responding. We appreciate it.

    madd sistahly love
    Coco :heart:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes..this is indeed soulfully deep...
    lovely collab Coco and Bishop :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    i can almost picture da vibe
    back and forth
    forth and back
    whoa...bout to have a heart attak...lol
    very nice...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowin yall
    lovin the vibe
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow wow wow I always read first and than come back to reply later and this was as potent NOW as it was the first time I read it :)
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so pretty!

    This is 100 percent dope, y'all. :D
     
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    WOW

    I wasn't sure I could absorb all of this...

    I'm awe struck...

    and overflowing with the "Brilliance" of this piece...

    WOW....WOW...WOW...WOW...

    you two should do this more often...
    believe...
     
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