Black Poetry : destiny's garden

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In destiny's garden
    there must be
    a bloom amidst the flowers
    and all things green
    rare if ever seen
    borne of the soil
    in a magic milieu of we
    petels in the hues of me and you
    like pink and blue
    yet the bloom is no more
    for it is wilted and withered
    bereft of petels
    even as it was bereft of love's light
    no longer watered by tears of joy
    now such a sad thing to see
    in the garden of destiny
    but such things don't die so easily
    for my minds eye peers
    into the depths of dappled dimness
    within this garden
    of all things destined
    and no question of life and
    the signs thereof arise
    for this flower
    though it scarcely stands
    in a wan of deprivation
    awaiting the occasion
    when love's light might again
    brightly shine
    where amorous clouds my roll again
    raining heaven's joy upon it
    that it would bloom again
    even its colors show again
    in destiny's garden
    for surely
    love must be
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh! yes brutha i know dis all so well
    another masterful scribe by the poet's pen
    tyte
     
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    this garden i do suppose
    is where i blossomed into a rose
    left to become a gardens key
    I soon controled the garden for me
    I love this :)
     
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    Hey skrybe7

    love must be
    in the garden
    the flower Bloom
    from the warmth
    of knowing you
    the color mix
    it enchant on looker
    yet this is a special garden
    for a special someone
    only they can keep
    the flower in blossom

    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Wow!..............................Skrybe

    You still captivate me........I'm speechless

    This is so Beautiful........I had to tell you!

    There are no flowery words or sugary prose
    I could ever add to this............It's a masterpiece,
    Simply put, A masterpiece!

    Wowed,
    Angelic
     
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    every spring
    the once-were inorganic seeds of tomorrow
    are in bloom
    have no fear for love is near
    yet no one knows when it will strike....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whooaaa now this was classic as they come
    and that's an understatement..

    wow,
    jh.
     
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