Black Poetry : Destiny

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The first time we met I knew we were destined
    Even though we were separated distance apart
    But we share the same values from our hearts
    Your smile brightens up my day
    What more can I say
    Being with you is like celebrating a holiday
    Touching You
    Caressing You
    Kissing You
    Its just the introduction
    To my seduction
    Close your eyes
    And use your imagination
    If we don't stop now
    Then probably be a child born creation
    Your soul from heaven
    Leaning on my shoulders
    A letter from God
    And some Angels
    I know I can't go wrong
    Just from what I say
    And your heart tone
    It plays a song
    That I can play all night long
    Like I'm missing you
    Your soft lips
    And the way you blow me a kiss
    Come on a baby be with me
    That's my only wish
    Tonight I don't want to be home alone
    Instead I rather make love to you
    All night long
    We can stop for a while
    Then later continue
    What's for dinner?
    I hope baby you're on the menu :)

    caramelpyton 2002
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well done
    i love it....nice drop:angel1:
    oh man i had this vibe thing...hope ya like it

    As I lay my head down to rest
    I feel your touch for I long to be with you
    Miles in between and I don’t understand
    But the feelin is the same…
    Your smile makes me shine..
    My wings do spread
    With the thought of you
    Knowing that you care…
    Hope is not lost…
    The love shared is there
    Within I hold on…for the
    creation of a new soul
    we shared...but lost..
    Maybe destiny will set me free
    So we can share
    Love opens up a new world every time.
    And to find a new angel can be hard..
    So I hold on to the
    one I have found in you
    tonight I will come home..
    you don’t have to be alone..
    ...............can ya tell i like..........:angel1:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hee hee hee....this is so cute, and well done.
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luvn dis...i can relate! nice very, nice
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    awwww...

    this was so sweet...
    I love the ending..
    such a pure proclamation
    of desire for someone
    who completes the heart...

    Very nice Caramel!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful scribe this was sweet
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You All

    Olakuoto ,
    $$RICH$$ ,
    angelicsage,
    BaduX,
    gempis,
    and mzblkangel ( ty for the drop back )

    Now all I have to do is find her...LOL
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome but thank you i felt the flow...
    glad ya didnt mind....
     
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    this is very lovely
    you're find her
    Peace
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty

    Bluewater TY , yes im sure I will
     
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