Black Poetry : Destiny

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Apr 17, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe that you and I were mean to be....

    Sorry it sounds like a **** fairy tale
    But that's just bein
    Me.

    You're everything I need
    You're not a day late or a dollar short
    Im fact, you're right on time

    Looking at you take me back to
    1994
    When we sat in stoops
    Lickin Charm suckers
    Playin "I Declare War"

    pulling pigtails sharin kisses
    Getting goofy, blowing out birthday wishes
    To present day, a woman at 17
    Been thru some deep **** with you
    Dow in this year "03"
    My first kis, My first love
    My first
    "Oww that hurts...go slow"
    We have secrets nobody knows

    So wether I'm loving you
    Or just plain sexing you
    Never think I'm dissin you
    Never leave my side Cuz I will
    Miss you

    Our love is 9 years in the making
    Like a cupcake in the oven baking..
    Only our cupcake isn't in the oven..yet

    Mixed with your integerity, courage, and intellect
    and my beauty, dignity and self-respect

    **** I can't wait
    Sometimes when we make love
    I cry from the satisfaction
    And you get scared at my reaction..
    But don't
    Cuz baby, you're everything I need
    Your every emotion I can read
    and know that I will never leave
    Your side
    Cuz this woman is in it for the long ride

    :heart:
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tight...very tight...keep scribin

    peace
    khasm
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooooweeeeeeeeeeee! da long ride
    felt in ya scribe , promised to never leave
    one's side dis where true love reside
    9 in da makings
    emotional bliss still baking
    u hang in their wit ya head up high !!!

    making it happen flow on !
     
  4. PurpleMoons

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    the turning of a child to a woman! i be like woah! this is absolutely tyte! remember this one here SwtT!
     
  5. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luv: The first is always the best...U never forget it:love:
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tyte piece...i'm lovin' it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya on fire
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $Rich$ is almost right...
    you aint on fire...:)
    YOU ARE THE FIRE !!!!
    Oh boy this one is HOT!!! :)
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ha ha ha! Thank you evryone. I really 'pricate it!!!!!!!!!!

    ^He's my best friend in the whole wide world..
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    felt like i was readin some stuff from the black renaissance...your growth is a beautiful story being unfolded before our eyes...thanx for sharing
     
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