Black Poetry : Destiny or bust

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting on manifestation
    Barely enduring gestation
    But there will be no abortion
    This mission will come to fruition
    I will hold on with my last breath
    To important to end in sudden death
    We're the same blood so I'll carry you
    If thats what it takes to see it through
    many touchdowns are missed in the inches
    Not realizing one more push would clinch it
    No more getting caught up in the chatter
    Delving into everyone elses other matter
    I am strengthening my own game plan
    Striving firstmost to please the MAN
    Baby, I am just too truly blessed
    To let anyone become my stress
    No time for stress factures
    I've bern remanfactured
    Focus on destiny alone
    I'm in the purpose zone
    Pushing to greatness
    Can't settle for less
    onward progress
    no more digress
     
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    Inspiration is all we need from one another and love plus peace to get us to our promised destiny!
    Wonderfully and creatively written for sure!
    Thank You for sharing your scribe with us! Much needed!
     
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    U took me there this was awesomely written sis.
     
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    Sister Poet asimplepoet,

    This piece is nothing less than brilliant. The visual aesthetic of the pregnant belly is a nice touch. What is especially remarkable is the fact you did not force or sacrifice your rhyme scheme or rhythm to achieve it. Powerful and heartfelt. Bravo, Sister Poet! Bravo.

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