Black Poetry : Destined

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Oct 3, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Precious whispers in my ear,
    allows me to know that you are near.
    The touch of your hand on mine,
    leaves us feeling entwined.
    The look so deep in your eyes is almost enough to hypnotize.
    My dreams are forever filled with you.
    I'm blessed to have a love this true.
    We share our feelings, thoughts, and dreams.
    You are the one for me, so it seems.
    No matter what we always go back.
    We are made for each other and that's a fact.
    The way I feel around you is more than I can explain.
    It's almost crazy how I can only speak your name. I want so much from this, I need you to know. I'll give all of my heart to you because I want our love to grow. :hearts2: :kiss1: :hearts2:
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your piece is very sweet. i am sure if you share this with the one you speak of it would be much appreciated.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Phenomenal, this was very sweet and endearing. :)
     
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    nice said....very sweet loving flow....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very lovely scribe so warm this made me look back at da sweet moment of time
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Lovin this poem. Very deep. Feelin this. :heart:
     
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    aaawe...this was soooooo sweet
    falling in love at its best...
    captured in the flow of
    a rhythmic piece of poetry...

    Very nice poet!
     
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