Black Poetry : destined love(another masterpiece)

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  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DESTINED LOVE

    I'm destined to love you,
    Destined to wake in your arms,
    destined to be your life source.
    I'm destined to love you.

    I'm destined to tingle your spine,
    Destined to butterfly your stomach,
    Destined to be the only thought in your mind when you sleep at night.
    I'm destined to love you.

    I'm destined to grow grey with you,
    Destined to wrinkle with you,
    Destined to be the one you say "i love you" to every given second and every given hour of each day.
    I'm destined to love you!!!!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    this had me floating

    *gigglin*

    nice work

    peace

    pd

    :heart:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can see,
    how you feel this person.
    and i know that deep down inside,
    that this person--you will never be hurtin'.
    because the love you feel,
    can only survive.
    if you keep saying you love them,
    until the day they die..................(i like this piece...add me)
     
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    destiny is something else, isn't it..when it touches you, you can feel it in the pit of your stomache, the crown of your head...wonderful, true piece of reality, here...
     
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    sweet

    this is somthing that i never have felt
    if this is possible
    my callous heart would surely melt....

    Khasm
     
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