Black Poetry : Destee Poets

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  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Poetic Players of Destee

    Defiantson
    Revolutionary poet talented beyond measure
    With scenes of family, life, the struggle, love and pleasure
    All wrapped up in the hypnotic cadence of you
    Driving women to distraction whenever you roll through
    In the soul of a poet lies the heart of a man
    The scribes of the defiant takes us where no one can

    Abstract
    I see strength in the delicate way you turn a phrase
    Leading us down your wondrous verbal maze
    The thoughtful play of adoration and happenstance
    Your quill’s variations of poetic destined circumstance
    Where we are suspended in a place that knows no space of time
    Waiting on you to tell us your stories of a wordsmith divine

    Howard
    Your concentrated tales of couples lounging on wispy clouds
    Or possibly a stanza of heartache painted on love’s shroud
    The just becaues and reminders you pout in her coat
    Or the honey covered kisses you place on her throat
    It’s clear that you’ll drop little notes until the moment you walk away
    So even when you’re gone the sweetness of it all will stay

    Rich
    Everyday you take center stage—court jester if you will
    Although not a joke is passed only the power of your quill
    The tireless efforts you make to show everyone love
    Makes me deem your angel of encouragement from the poetic heaven above
    Politicin’ with the family giving dap and shaking hands
    Got these women wide open wishing you were their man



    The Heart of Destee Queens

    Nevar
    You think no one notices or really seems to care
    The ways you try to be everything to everyone everywhere
    Adding your own special touches and nefarious flare
    No one can stop you from getting it because you are already there
    I wish you could see what we’ve already seen
    The heart of a soldier and the elegance of a queen.

    Cursed
    I see you trying to find a way
    To feel past the numb of today
    Sister you’re stronger now then you dared to dream
    Your future is brighter now then it ever seemed
    You opened up to new things and freed your spirit
    Once you opened up your heart and decided to hear it

    4Ever
    You held back on you until he knew his own way
    You son’s all grown up now and it’s mama’s time to play
    You shed yourself and gathered more strength
    The poetic destiny of contentment was only a matter of length
    The early bloomer who fell late on the scene
    Corrupting my angel Rich and sissy Nevar with ease
    Shame on you!

    Just playing around... it's all love fam...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh that was nice , i'm innocent as day
    no one can corrupted me in any way
    when my poetic hand come out to play
    I am that I am and here to stay !

    Thankz for the praise
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhhh sis you get a big hug ahhhhhhhhh im so full of tears. cry me a river, cry me , cry me, cry me a river ahahhhhhhhhhhhh somebody come get me.
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i gotcha nevar hugz........very nice piece IfUComeSoftly:) Much love

    AM
     
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    Sista softly;

    That is a really nice write. Thank you for including me.

    But I did not know I was corrupting anyone. I so sorry if that is the impression that I have given. Thanks again sista.

    Much Luv to you.
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol... sis... i am just kidding... have you seen these people's post before you rolled in.. including mine... we are probably corrupting you... lol... it's all love sis...


    thanks aaliyah... nevar... smh... the street lights are on... what are you and 4ever doing out?... lol

    thanks again rich...
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its all luv my sista softly.

    I told you b/4 I throw rocks at the street lights.
    So stop tryn' to make me go nite-nite. lol

    Although I will be soon.

    Much luv to you
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and Blessings ma,

    I appriciate the love but I am a modest and humble person. All I write about is what i feel and see out in this world. I don't deserve all the praise. All I am trying to do is arise some consiousness among us. Thank you very much,
    I really am speechless, kind of like a solar eclips when the sun and the moon are alined to give us a beautiful vision of what day light looks at night.

    Peace and Poetry

    Mannie
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    WoW..Quia...that was a impressive piece...you just put poets on point....im honored just to be mentioned in this piece...that's a real witty write...beloved.

    you continue to amaze me....
     
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