Black Poetry : Destee Fam. This One's 4 U

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  1. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've blessed me
    With your words
    Uplifing in their syllables
    And true to the meaning of life.......
    Moving in such a manner as to pierce my soul
    And show me,
    Show myself in a new inner beam of richousness
    I can not begin to imagine
    What would have happened
    If I never found this release
    This energizing outlet That is POETRY
    It comes over me
    And off my tounge speaks words openly
    Overcoming my deepest fears in rhymic theropy
    So happy to be
    Allowed to watch such a talent grow
    Pour the spirit of those before you
    In each verse....
    Each stanza.....
    Each period.......
    I curse The day when I cannot be smothered
    In other worldly accents of your work
    Each name on the list
    Here's the props you deserve
    You enlighten me,
    Everyday, you lyriaclly heighten me
    You Brighten me:
    I'll still be here fightin' free with my sponge like flesh
    To soak up all you have to give
    And show you Much Respect....

    thank you.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome ... Let me introduce myself to you...

    Hey Mo'Effective...... nice to meet you ~ I am N2...ur...Soul

    Let your third eye
    sing an acappella
    the sacred words
    that are from an abysmal

    d
    e
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    n
    d
    i
    n
    g

    from the depths of your soul
    remove the practical
    and consider the
    abstract
    as your instruction ~

    Poetical academia comes
    forth in abundance from within--
    representations of conceptual
    lexicons that
    occupy your
    attention... to detail... as you learn
    to share your gifts freely
    with others
    in this family
    do not abstain
    ~let go
    ~let your energy consummate the flow
    through a spectrum
    of colors that transverse
    through processes of
    mental concentration
    mo'effective ~ly

    allow me
    to make my own
    interpretations of
    your proses
    Just be the connection
    between the
    current that you
    expose

    Express your s e l f
    any way that
    you please ~

    Would you care to dance
    with the SoulurN2?



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  3. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRULY

    Truly a pleasure to meet you
    To read you
    On this screen
    Where I have seen so many come before me
    For I am not the last
    I am not that fortuante to last forever
    No matter whether
    If I am immortal
    I shall allow your port-hole
    Of beauty to consume me
    And speak with you per-chance
    Turn up the radio
    SoulurN2
    Let's Dance.............
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My volume is on
    full blast
    no questions
    shall come forth from these lips
    closing my eyes
    Eye-See
    images of
    who you might be
    rivers to flow N2
    streams
    of consciousness
    repitition of salutations
    that grace sequences
    of phrases
    I catch your rhythm
    in the variation of my hand
    and I slowly

    ...tap
    .....tap
    .......tap

    Onomatopoeic
    melodies in the appearance
    of artistic literaries
    resembling finite qualities
    for others to memorialize
    Immerse yourself
    within me
    for you have
    been
    poetically
    baptized
    by celestial shadows
    that rinse impurities
    away from your occurance
    ......submerge N2
    responses that react upon
    demand
    identify with a sista that
    neutralizes meditation
    so that you can
    feel your own heart
    beat
    ....beat
    ......beating endless ...
    breathing life ~
     
  5. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm In Love

    Non Grater
    Than that of the words you versed
    In your reply
    Praise to the most high
    And then go beyond
    Through the satelights
    Beaming images back to earth
    Scrambling tv screens
    Can not decipher this rhym sceme
    Though you have cracked the code
    Givin me reasons to unload
    My various
    Vision of intergalactic war-fair
    Splinters stic my tactic thorn chair
    And won't allow me to sit
    So I shall rise
    And bow my head For I have been baptized
    And let hung out to dry
    In your beams unseen by the sun
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...then Love Me Well

    Can your mind read
    Morse codes
    that
    OVERlap
    with pressure
    from piezzo's measure
    identifying letters
    of the phonetic alphabet
    my voice
    standardizes
    communication
    turning
    "we" into
    personified inaminate
    objects ~ to tinker with
    I review
    the relationship of your
    words and
    eye-see
    the technique of
    two-dimensional
    depth from your
    three-dimensional
    perspective
    ...so suggestive... you
    are fitting
    as a KING
    pervading and permeating
    my
    love of words
    ...you caress my thoughts
    and evoke poetical conv(her)sations
    that allow me
    to write ...
    in between the sheets
    of poetry

    If you're in love, then all I can say is "Love me well"...
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2 Mo

    glad to see a newcomer drowning--
    in the throws of this muti-syllabic debocle--
    that is destee--

    Mo'Effective--

    welcome.

    with
    all
    that is in sean

    inviting you to throw yourself--
    in this metaphoric ocean--
    that is our fam.

    welcome!



    sean.
     
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    MoEffective ... thank you for this
    doing my heart so much good
    reading your words

    it is a pleasure for us to have you

    thank you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  9. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All Mine

    I've said it once and i'll say it again....
    Being surrounded by such talent makes me wanna
    go back to my past and create for my future.
    Honestly I am honored to be able to voice my mind
    and it be accepted by such people of profound imagery.
    Trust me Destee,, The Pleasure is All Mine
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this

    fillin me!


    welcome, and thank you Poet! You will find the language of Love spoken fluently here!

    a
     
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