Black Poetry : Despicable Men

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dorothy loves the ride
    But odds are...
    Her Oz,

    Just
    Ain't
    No good

    Pimp ~
    Bastard goon
    Punked good for nothing
    In a pimped out hot-air balloon

    Girls
    Crudely used
    Tricks amused

    A b-itches brew of
    Sex trade misogyny
    Self hate and despicable men



    Darryl Abdu Omari :flowers:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ copyright 2011
     
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    I enjoyed the whole; but the last stanza, for me, spoke the loudest.

    .....made me think of the "Self-Fulfilling Prophecy."
     
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    look I got to be honest because one day I'm gonna have to meet my maker look you put no time into this piece right here you didn't capture any ideas sorry just being honest
     
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    Thanks for your comments

    Oh... bro. Rhymebad, honesty is the best policy.

    To be quite honest myself, I could give a flying ****
    what you think, Sorry, just being honest.

    :shutup: