Black Poetry : Desperately Love You

afroprincess

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Desperately Love You
By: afroprincess

If you stay then Ill stay
But if you go then I’ll follow
My dreams are in you
In everything that say and do
Forever I ask that you take me as your one and only
For I believe that you are everything I ever wanted
So from me to you I say that I desperately love you

All my life it seems that I have spent my time trying to find you
And now that I have I spend my time trying to make you happy
For your happiness is tied in so closely with mine
If ever you want for me all you have to do is say
Baby I miss you come back to me
And then Ill be there in a hurry
Because it’s true that I desperately love you

If you stay then I’ll stay
But if you go then I’ll follow
My dream is you
In everything that you say and do
Forever you asked if I’d be your one and only
For you believe that I am everything you ever wanted
So from you to me you say that you desperately love me

In time I plan to make my life long with you
Have some kids and a dog if that’s what you want to do
We maybe young but then again our love is stronger than any storm time could give
We been through the rain, we stood tall against the storms
Now it’s time for us to be together forever God willingly

If you stay and I stay then we stay together
But if you go and I go then love will follow
Our dreams are in each other
In everything we say and do
Forever we want to be each other’s one and only
For we believe that we make everything we ever wanted
So it’s true that we desperately love each other

Baby I love more than anything
I love you more than life
I love more than space if it’s possible
Oh Baby I love you past my body
I love you past my mind
I love you past my heart
Baby I love you with my soul
So yes it’s true that I desperately love you

That’s why I give my hand
And agree to be the woman that makes your life complete
I give you happiness and just ask the same for me
Even though you already made it possible
I give you everything I am
For nothing in return I tell you yes I am
Yes it’s true that I desperately love you

So if you stay then I’ll stay
But if you go then I’ll follow
My dreams are in you
In everything that say and do
Forever I ask that you take me as your one and only
For I believe that you are everything I ever wanted
So from me to you I say that I desperately love you


***This poem is really important to me...so I would appreciate you guys being truthful and telling me what you really think.***
 
Truthfully, you put alot a heart into your ink. I think love consumes us and sometimes I would even go as far to say that love does become desperate and we will follow the one we love to the ends of the earth. This poem has a nice sound and poignant emotions flowing everywhere. I have no doubt that your in love after reading it. So just make it happen if it hasn't already occured. Tell this brother so he can be just as desperate about you as you are about him. In desperation we find hope and hope can be love it you want it to be.
 
A sorry poem??

afroprincess said:
Actually I just wrote this because I'm getting married in a month and I'm thinking of using this as a surprise for him during the ceremony. I just want to know what some people think of it before I call my self surprising my man with a sorry poem. But thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it.

Girl this is hot!!!
Yr future husband might steal u away b4
the ceremony ends if he hears this. This is
so,so,so sweet. I love it!!!!
:hearts4: :hearts3: :hearts2:
 

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