Black Poetry : Desperate Treasures

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Mar 21, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i could kiss your feet for a 1000 years

    if you'd wipe away my tears

    and treat me like the rest of your peers

    we both have fears

    about what would happen if we went to Cheers

    one night

    and had a good time despite

    the fact i spilled Sprite

    on your dress

    when i tried to outguess

    your common sense

    and held you in suspense

    was i in love or just too dense

    to realize

    that your pies

    sitting on the window weren't for me?

    but reality is too hard to see

    with your personality so free

    like the wind

    if i could suspend

    time

    i'd talk to you a little

    so we could unwind

    but i can't, so our riddle

    stays in the back of my mind

    twisting



    love,

    howard
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Yes
    You always have a good flow
    Your rythum is always on que
    Much Love Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u droppin it like a treasure here.........
     
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    HI Howard
    This is a very lovely, Love Poem I had to take a breathe just from the reading of the first two lines
    Wonderful and very relaxing flow poet
    Peace and Love
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww dat was a sweet poem, i liked it, so flo on wit nonstop my bratha

    blackluv and bp
     
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