Black Poetry : Desire

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Aug 10, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am a float in desire
    above the daily movements
    of my life
    suspended in cotton batting
    so soft and warm

    Sounds are muffled
    no words getting through
    to my mind

    Only hearing the rhythm
    of my blood flow
    the drumming in my head
    of the sounds of my
    throbbing
    yearning
    swelling
    reaching for you
    pulsating
    V----a.
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beautiful thing to watch poetic flow begin to grow. Begin to attack paper with pen and heart...flourish.

    BE
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat, Encouragement from you is so special it makes my heart soar. I might just have to write about that. Thank you for your read and very kind words. :)
     
  4. smilin_dwarf

    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    Call me a dope, but what's the "V----a" at the end, Viagra? Well written, tightly woven, as usual, your passion glows. Oops, I get it now, sorry, keep it flowing Gaylee.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm holding myself with my eyes closed... (you know, what I do when it's gooooood!) :wink:
    Speak to me early and often like the natural woman you be ,Missy Gaylee! :heart:

    alyce
     
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    REAch...
    out and touch someone.:)
    as you pulsate
    in wait(ing)
    for things arising
    swelling
    throbbing
    at the touch of a
    silky smooth
    and moistly wet
    v----a:)

    hmmm...

    let the river flow.
     
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