Quiet Poetry Lounge : desire

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Jun 9, 2012.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come to me
    beneath the stars
    and teach me your touch
    while the leaves whisper
     
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    if i come
    would you allow me to consume you
    to wallow in each breath of you
    as we listen to the leaves grow
    that you might come to know
    me
     
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    there was a time and place
    where the leaves brushed against the sky
    and i desired to be your every breath
    so that i might know you

    so wonderful to feel your words against mine again, my friend.

    (smile)
     
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    have immersed myself in my writing--want to finish this novel by 2013. just dropped by to see what'sup.

    be good.:)
     
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    Good to know you're writing. Sounds like all is going well. I know you're busy but come to the playground every now and again because this playmate misses you.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully scripted .....enjoyed this a lot.
     
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    Thank you, $$RICH$$,

    Glad you enjoyed.
     
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