Black Poetry : DESIRE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Jan 2, 2006.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I desire you beyond my control
    from the highest of mountains...
    to the depths of my soul

    For you are the only light that I see
    the spark of your light, that shines, sea to sea

    For when God made me, he had you in mind
    assuring me, you were one of a kind

    I'm soblessed to share, treasured moments with you
    and I savor each blessing...we go through

    Sometimes at night, I dream we're apart
    awaken with the greatest, pain in my heart

    I could never imagine...a Me without You
    or entertain the thought of starting anew

    cause

    My greatest desire is to love you
    and place no one...above you
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow On Sis!!

    Very, nice, sweet, relaxing and calming to the soul. Thanks for sharing!!
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And that, is why we are SO blessed.
     
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    Wow...don't we all have a desire for that special someone/thing. Wonderful piece poet of the week, I see only happiness in the air for you...keep droping those tight lyrics, we're reading and enjoying
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    And his love is felt too
    because he so loveth u
    can't see past or anew
    with out soblessed
    heart dats true...............
    this was lovely and very sweet i was dreammin it was me wow !!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing about a love made just for you is always like a breath of fresh air. This was lovely poet of the week.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Sister Poet
    This was a very nice piece
    Touching Sister Touching
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone for the LOVE
    Special Thank YOU to QUEENTSWANA
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS REAL SOULFUL AND FROM YOUR HEART AND I THANK YOU POET FOR SHARING YOURSELF. GREAT POEM.
     
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    Awesome and Touching as TanTrum would say.
     
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