Black Poetry : Desire

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  1. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    Desire

    Shadows playing on the wall
    as we lay by the fire
    wearing nothing at all
    I'm your heart's desire
    My hands trace an 'S'
    down the middle of your chest
    My fingers,
    My lips,
    My tongue,
    they all ache to caress your skin
    But I wait
    opting to escalate
    your arousal
    I pull you close to me
    and inhale your scent
    of pure masculinity
    This is the sweetest torment
    As I hold you near
    I whisper in your ear
    I want you
    I need you
    I love you
    As we ride this wave of ecstasy
    until it's as big as a hurricane
    you have my guarantee
    that you'll feel no pain
    your moans in my ear
    sends my body into overdrive
    the end is near
    I am now truly alive
    As we calm down this tempest
    and cool down the fire
    my body can finally rest
    as your heart's desire
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was hot and str8 butta smooth
    lovin it keep flowin'
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot:
    this was nice...
     
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    Very Nice. Fire and Desire.... nothing like it
     
  5. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    thanx, everybody. I only hope I did the moment justice.
     
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    Whoa! Tight! Way hot, too. :)
     
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    I'm your heart's desire
    My hands trace an 'S'
    down the middle of your chest


    oh my............this was......(whew) like whoa!
    Hot, would be an understatement at this point
    but I'm speechless of a better term...
     
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    oh my goodness
    i am feeling the Rapture
    in this
    :hot:
    nice flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  9. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    thanx. This was just one of those moments

    where ice cubes melt on the skin
    and something eternal grows within
    where you both enjoy the heat
    as your body moves to an unheard beat
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this....very nice...
     
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