Black Poetry : " Desire # 4 "

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ( this poem contains about 4-6 lines of Erotic City by Prince,
    the rest is me )



    Desire # 4



    Everytime I comb my hair, thoughts of you get in my eyes.
    You're a sinner - I don't care, I just want your creamy thighs.

    The steady drive of a bassline , she feels it.

    dmmmm, da doomp dmmmmm, da dooomp


    whether doves cry or not, whether love hides or not.

    A pleasure so sticky both of us lick twice.
    All of my purple Life - yada, yada deutoronomy -

    " Giiiirrrrl ,, are you runnin or dancin ?? "

    How I wish you were my dame

    My wish you were how I came

    ... so close to bathing myself in your dirty thougths.
    Your dirty walk, your dirty ought to meet my filthy
    they would last the whole song.
    Cuz Erotic City is one loooong trip
    & I can tell by the lick in your thi....
    oops, I mean the Look in your eyes ,
    that you Ret to Go .
    So , here - Wear This :

    an evening such as this calls for special attire -

    What ? Whatchoo mean you don't like the outfit ???


    Girl this is NON- FAT maple syrup - just relax, try it on.

    Gotta stop by the Wrecka Stowe ,
    we gon' need every extended remix Prince ever made.

    Every time I comb my hair, thoughts of you get in my eyes....

    thoughts like - " everytime you wear that skirt,
    my teeth end up in your thighs "

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    I know the plaigarism issue was really big a few weeks ago,
    so if need be - I can back through and tell which lines
    I " borrowed " from the song - but yo -
    music and movies inspire me , nahmeen ???


    also, who can tell me what movie " Wrecka Stowe " is from ????
    ( 200pts !!! for the winner )
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  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daaaaammmnnn Hyp~

    Ya' know I live in the city where PURPLE Kingdomz resides too.
    Definitely a fan of his ~ and your work too Boo.

    This was a naughty lick, but I'm lovin' whatcha do!!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HYPNOTIZE.....

    You are as Royal as the PurpleOne...
    so why not use a few of his lynes?? (lol)

    i mean you did say what you were doing... anyway!

    this was tyght & done in your always orygynal/creatIve style!!
    i can 'preciate dat! (lol)...

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it all leads back to thighs doesn't it ??? - LOL !!

    You live in Minneapolis ?????????? - dang big sis,

    you are lucky, I've never been - but would love to go.




    GA, I SHOULD use some of his lines huh ?? - LOL
    Amethysts are purple, so I'm entitled - LOL !!!!


    peace ya'll
     
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