Black Poetry : Designing The Ideal Black Man

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I could select the right
    chemistry to design and
    create my ideal black man
    There'd be no need for using
    the entire 63 elements --

    The periodic table I would
    use would include
    far less -

    Nothing to complicated
    just enough so that
    I wouldn't make a
    complete mess ~

    Carefully using atomic #34
    my black man would have a sheer
    metallic lustre
    ...atomic #11 - I would
    reverse the chemical properties
    so as to not disrupt
    his physical qualities

    Add a bit of H20 so that I
    could drink from his thoughts ~
    and of course I can't forget
    atomic #8 better known as the
    'O' --
    Oxygen he'd need, because
    it is responsible for
    the bright red, yellow, and green
    -- colors of the Aurora ,
    which is also essential to the
    'DAWN' of each day

    Au are the letters that
    represent gold --
    ...fit for my King...
    when finely divided
    the yellow
    fades to black
    ~~but is worth its weight~~

    Mixing in terbium (Tb)
    isolated like rain
    makes him soft enough
    to touch
    and eases
    all pain

    Designing my very own black man
    Compounding my mate
    to have and to hold for eternity
    specially formulated:

    Se + An + H2O + O + Au + Tb = ALL FOR ME

    ~ KEY ELEMENTS OF LOVE ~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watch me rise from my sleeping grace...

    awakened by the kiss of a righteous and beautiful QUEEN.:)

    come to me, babygurl. i's be hea.

    creation is proper.
    do what you do.

    peace.
     
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    so what's the symbol for the element 'tyte'??
    'ur' perhaps??
    xtra creative piece.

    me
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller~

    Honey I'm here...
    come swoop me up King!! :wink:

    Thank you for reading my
    creation...

    Much :heart:
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah ~

    Your response was creative
    in and of itself!

    Thanks for the read!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome!

    awesome! (please understand I've just read it for the 10th time ~ and still only one word comes to mind ~ here it goes again:) AWESOME!

    A
     
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    see...i knew thaqt chenistry set i bought you would be good for something :D ...or was it the Dr. Doolittle dvd :lol:

    this scribe is tight and i likes the way you mix up them there chemicals...

    just don't make nothing too explosive...this borad is rent to own :rolling:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah

    Alyce ~ its cool that you had to read it 10 times, I don't mind... thank you for the positive feedback as well...
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dnommo ~

    Hey brotha'... thank you for the read ~ I promise to be careful when I'm in the lab...!! I see Imma have to pull you up in there to work on your keyboarding skills... :lol:

    Place your fingers on the "home keys" maaaannn!!

    Much :heart: dnommo!!
     
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    J'Hiah - you are tooooo crazy,

    that got me crackin up,
    grinnin all big, - folks starin at me.

    But Ms. N2ursoul, you deserve every compliment.

    I've often fantacized on creating the
    perfect woman - but you took it there on that
    scientific,rhythmic level.

    this was official!
     
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