Black Poetry : Desert Storm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Nov 20, 2002.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1 quiet mornin as i enter into eternal silence,

    I see da sunshine in da midst of da blue skies,

    Apparently, as i begin to gaze into da sunlight,

    I feel da wind blowin viciously, as it blows very quietly,
    I went back inside 4 shelter,

    And i began 2 write dis letter,

    2 hours later, da sky gets a little mo dark,

    And i start to get terrrified dat somethin was goin on,

    When da sun disappeared, da clouds began to dissimate as well,

    I knew something was comin, cause only time would tell,

    Its gettin darker and darker, and i can feel da weather gettin cold,

    I smell da rain comin, so who knows what's in store,

    I hear da tornado drill, as it begins to detect a warning,

    Dat a major desert storm, 100 miles per hour was comin,

    So quickly, i ran 2 da basement, and ducked my head against da wall,

    I began to feel somethin shake, but apparently, nothing moved at all,

    All night long, i hid til i couldn't move an inch,

    And da reason why; I knew dis wasn't da end of it.

    AALIYAHMONET

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  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alright now!
    this is tyght...a tribute perhaps?

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  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww that's sweet thank you thank you thank you beautiful poetry i loved it!!!!
    Bravo
     
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