Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 25, 2001.
the taliban walks
in america's nikes
...both have dirty so(u)les
Now This Haiku Is Deep
Now ain't dat the truth. Sometimes the truth hurts and it takes courage to face it. We all have dirty souls. Thus, we must come to Jesus for cleansing. That's one thing that we as a nation, must do. Without Christ, though we be great, we are yet small.
It is not enuff as a nation to throw cliches around in the air, such as "God Bless America". We must go deeper than that and humbly say "Jesus, forgive us...for we have sinned." America must look at her moral decay as a warning sign and get back on track or else we will continue to fall from here.
This hard-hitting haiku totally sums up the spiritual condition of a great nation, but I believe America will turn her face towards God and live.
you hit me with this one
i'm too smooth yet you're too deep
i'll give it an A+
TELL THE GOSPEL TRUTH!!!!!!
Have Mercy! This is it exactly!
And to Joyce....not "America", the country, but certainly, "Americans", the individuals, will turn their faces toward God, and live. It is written.
Thank you for this
Joyce, i agree.
i just can't remember when America was ever on track.
thanx for the read queen.
trudat. "as for me and my house...." i believe you know the rest...
poetic delight (my tyte)
yo i checked out your website. hay was that..??
i got a lot o' dangs to catch u up with when we kinect.
and here i was going to buy some Jordan's...tight haiku bro'
truly dropping seeds from the garden i see...
ain't but 1 word for this
thank you for imparting the truth with such precision and skill!
yes sir fo real
A MASTERPIECE !!
lol.. i heard Osama is feelin' fubu..
thanx for tha read from garden to meadow...
thanx for the words. i try.
thanx for the love, no doubt.
..as i await a $$RICH$$ masterpiece..
soul-utions! PEACE AND PROSPERITY
"WHOSOEVER SHALL CALL UPON THE NAME OF
THE LORD SHALL BE SAVE." ROMANS 10:13
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