Black Poetry : desensitization...

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we ubzorb things
    that make our hearts
    stony and tears dry
    like wells in desert
    heat.

    one word describes
    why are mindz are off beat

    desensitization.....
    that throws off beat,
    our mental regulation,
    leading to discombobulation,

    which severs our connection,
    to inner emotion,
    its flipped like a ship
    in an ocean
    or a sea

    we ubzorb things
    deadly
    that poison,
    our dreams







    i wrote this thinking about the things we see on,in T.V movies etc. ect.


    yo dis is from ya scribin, poetic GODDESS,hope u like the poem, enjoy
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this flow you're putting out....thanks for sharing this.
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanxs bishop,i thanx u for takeing your time to reply, to my poem.
     
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    feeling you on this story..loving this flow..scribe on.wonderful
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ur flowin in a zone ....let da ink drop.....!
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall,
    for comin
    through here
    and readin
    my stuff
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah we do
    you couldn't be more true
    society has scratched and skipped our CD
    and thrown our natural rhythm off beat...
    its a shame....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tru tru what a shame
    thanx for readin
     
  9. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE!! I am digging this. I can always expect to read something good on my lunch breaks, thanks to you girlie! :)
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanxs sis i appreciate it,and if that boss gets on your nerves
    now u have a place u can go to!!