Black Poetry : Description in 6/8

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****Folks i'm experimenting with a new form of oriental poetry known as 'Luc Bat,' which means 'six eight.' This is a poetic style from Vietnam and you would be surprised how beautiful these oriental poetic styles truly are. This piece is written by my alter ego, Dark Wynne


    The inflections of my earthy touch and style,
    succeeds in far reaching and speeding from inch to mile in odd time.
    In the silence between the heaven and earth to the tune of a rhyme,
    with the precision of endless time and the arcane,
    desiring to reach deep into the soul without the obscene or profane;
    The dark, husky purity of my voice rings across the earth's vein carried
    on the wind.
    Speaking against the wrongs of this age to the accompaniment of a dolphin's fin.
    The entities listen and tree's bend while God inclines his ear and the
    shy rumbles.
    The music within in me bubbles with a deep grumble.
    I speak forth mysteries, always in prayer never to stumble and loose contact.
    Full of integrity and righteousness, never slack.
    Confident and proud with a high-held head and back, I smile.

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "HyeKlass Publishing"
    *Dark Wynne*
     
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    Therious Banned MEMBER

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    smooth flow. soothing,
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love pa. I appreciate it.
    ~Dark Wynne
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very unique lovin da style bruh !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok din you din went
    a prince on us:lol:
    my brother this was nice flowing
    peace
    Angel
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you ma for your love.
     
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    I agree with therious, this was very calming.
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate you Watzin. One love
     
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