Quiet Poetry Lounge : Descent

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earthly Allure, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I began
    my descent into
    the inner
    workings of
    my dark soul.
    A transformation began
    to the ancient sound of Hatian drum-
    beats.
    My body swayed to the
    Carribbean rhythms and
    deep within, something responded.
    I was left feeling
    drained
    yet strangely alive and revived.
    My body and soul seemed
    seperated
    at the breathing of the
    first haunting chord,
    enraptured and entranced;
    I fell within the stygian
    deep, consumed and
    bombarded by the smooth
    voices of my
    ancestors singing
    Freedom! Liberty! Individuality! And Uniqueness!!
    My inner man trembled
    and retreated even deeper.
    The midnight seemed steeper and soon
    daybreak broke through the gate.
    I was reborn,
    grasping my lost element....
    The newness of individuality in
    accepting...ME!

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne Publishing"
    ~Dark Wynne
     
  2. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked your poem, it was unique
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much.
     
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    Almost missed this piece!
    Very soul rejuvenating!
    Sends a glorious chill
    throught out me!
    Loving it!
     
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    i love it....:heart: :kiss: :luv:
    :coffee:
    -story
     
  6. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love Story
     
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