Black Poetry : DEPTH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Apr 24, 2004.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doing it uniquely different from the deep of God's heart.
    Every perimeter tingling with the rains of His wisdom.
    Pointing to a new and powerful level of thinking.
    There in His poetic zone...my soul releases.
    Having pen in hand, my ink awaits for His next line.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was short, sweet and to the point...I can relate to that and thanks for sharing this...looking for more.
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think this is the first poetic acronym for me!
    Well appreciated
    Appropriately titled because this concise piece
    Is overflowing with depth.
    I feel ya.

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh!! Joyce
    this was on point as i await for u
    to pen me again ...sweet release
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just like his love, straight to the point, I like your style.
     
  6. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bowing before great poets...thank you.
     
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    WOW!
    Powerful,
    Unique,
    And captivating!
    I love it!
     
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    tight love it
    on point
    likes
     
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    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this. I have said so many times that writing a poem feels like channeling God's heart....Nic
     
  10. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you poets.

    For so long I sought me. I discovered and felled in love with the inner me when I connected with the Father thru His Son...Jesus. I'm free and learning evermore about the inner me in Christ. Many won't understand this, but those who have made this decision will know where I'm coming from. He's not far away from anyone...I found this to be truly true, though at first I didn't think so. Thus, I am able to write as I do.

    Joyce
     
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