Black Poetry : DEPTH OF PAIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through my conscious
    i have this pain, one
    that seem to stain my brain
    depth of pain from past hurt
    and now dem my worth

    I'm as strong as any
    fill with life's good N'plenty
    through silent prayer
    and soul of care i bare da
    pain

    I've tryed to lean on you
    and still you let me fall
    yet you seem to wanna lift
    but judge me as faith covers
    me in essence of growth my
    worth is no curse or any worse

    let me go and be as i am
    try not to false witness my worth
    and slumberize my chamber
    for i am , that i am and what
    my heart wish and to be , please
    let me go , in da depth of pain

    teach with respect , cast not my
    mistakes but know we all made them
    can one caress me without pain
    can one comfort me without name
    can one see me without tame

    preach wit honor , without a hit
    understand or overstood let it be
    the will of good , cast not fear
    it hurts so let me go through my tear
    depth of pain friendship shame
    i can't be blamed, let me go as i pray
    to the mighty from this day
    and find my reward my just due

    through da depth of pain can u let me go
    I ask no mo please no mo just let me go.

    for one's that knoweth and care let it go
    leave it be, so one can be free can't u see
    da pain inside me or is it to be judged of me!

    let me go !
     
  2. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$,baby, u always bring it
    & when u bring it, u always bring sumthin thats worth bein' brought

    Real tight piece!!!


    :climb:to tha top
     
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    I feel like this right now. My how you get down to the very words that I feel. Depth of pain. Nice write brother rich. Heartfelt.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We're human we all make mistakes, and it doesn't help to feel that you are being persecuted because of it. A helping hand should uplift not smack down. Understanding your flow brotha.
     
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    i can feel the pain and the release of the pain as i read this was so moving for we all make mistakes. what dont break you makes you stronger....i love the depth of this my Richness......Peace Angel
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz ladyafrika i had to say it let it out ........

    thankz krazylyricks don't give up my friend keep on moving forward

    thankz watz indeed ya on point it hurt when one smacks

    thankz Angel sho nuff the pain has stain and left a feeling heavy
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    reads like a humble prayer rich....
    i say amen to it and pray that your faith will get you through the pain and that you trust the faith to resolve the questions...
     
  8. LURK

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    I'm as strong as any
    fill with life's good N'plenty
    through silent prayer
    and soul of care i bare da
    pain

    I've tryed to lean on you
    and still you let me fall
    yet you seem to wanna lift
    but judge me as faith covers
    me in essence of growth my
    worth is no curse or any worse

    let me go and be as i am
    try not to false witness my worth
    and slumberize my chamber
    for i am , that i am and what
    my heart wish and to be , please
    let me go , in da depth of pain


    !!!Brother Rich...thats me right there man!!!......the depth is too deep.....this is a great peice man....who else to bless it but you
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big thankz Deepy as the feeling run and pain stain da heart

    hey LURK what's up man ......big thankz and know that with prayer it will
    all happen and work out in the end
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know your pain. Keep your head up.
     
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