Black Poetry : DEPRESSION

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With face expression,I show depression
    a sista full with so much pressure
    Im thinking about closure
    feeling the need of sleep and no speak
    failing skool,people saying this s**t aint koo
    having low self-esteem,im feeling like,
    my life engine produces no steam
    lost dreams is what it seems
    but stress is what i mean
    words blow by like the wind
    pain comes back like twins
    drugs are closer to me than medicine
    my mind loses self knowledge
    I feel like im slowly gaining courage
    my watch has no time 4 church
    sadly im putting God aside and everybody else
    even including myself
    you cant call this action selfish
    but rediculous!
    there for I have no comception
    and now I only ask,is how will
    I come to realization, when theres no
    configuration?​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    seek thy master the father above
    in prayer where his love abid
    to guide you give u steam
    bring new means to ya dream
    hold on for prayer is the key....

    This piece was felt deep within
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u my bratha rich
    that means a lot to me
    but i will luk up 2 god
    but sometimes i feel like god doesnt even see me or hear me
    and yes i kno hes busy and im not da only one in pain but life is hard
    to enjoy wit stress and depression cuz this s**t is real
    but i feel ya words on dat


    blackluv and bp
     
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    he seem to not see or hear but truely he's making
    a way for you to be released from stress or bring
    hope to tame depression........he work in ways we
    may never understand ................Keep ya head up
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i will my bratha, but jus kno dat errthing in dis poem aint all botu me
    its bout me and a lot of otha plp, but mostly the part bout stress n depression
    yea datz all on me..lol..so dont be thinkin im doin drugz and failin skool cuz i aint..lol i jus wanted 2 clear dat up, datz if u thought dat
    much luv


    blackluv and bp
     
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    i feel ya and understand ....
     
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    and i ask that you give our heavenly father a chance
    he wont offer ya a song and a dance

    but salvation where you heart may rest
    you dont need me sista to tell you what best

    because you know our Father is a healer
    he aint no drug dealer

    who's job is to keep you as his long-time customer
    then wanna put you down when the money runs out and call you a buster
    caused your heart to fluster

    because man couldnt satisfy you
    leaving your soul naked whats a girl to do

    pray on the matter
    let our Father again touch you to make your soul gro fatter

    to let the sun touch your pretty face
    i tell ya is his goodness want go to waste

    because we all had a taste of the tree
    i cant and wont forget about me

    but i wont let depression get me down
    wont let it continue to have me to wear a frown

    but you need to pray
    and ask for Depression to go away
    because you have the suit of armor that our Father has left you with for today

    and until the end of time
    He wont press rewind

    and play out all your sins before you
    he's here to teach and love and discipline thats what he do

    so if you want pray for yourself then i will
    until
    then
    my friend

    dont let this emotion

    Depression

    set in..............
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u my sistah nevar
    dat was so sweet and full of truthz
    and i have been prayin and i also hope u pray az well
    and i am fightin it, cuz dis depression dat i have iz strong
    but ima keep my head up
    much luv 2 ya sis


    blackluv and bp
     
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