Black Poetry : Depressing Struggle

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Somewhere outside da cage of my mind
    from dis depressing struggling tyme
    awaits a place my soul can shine
    beyond the life of earth isn't mine

    I've come cross da days of my sledge
    as i sit on da edge of da ledge
    looking out into da world of morrows
    seeing living great sorrows

    Leave me in tears
    still my heart fears
    for all my fallin before me peers
    from da yester years gone by
    i sit , i sit ....sit and cry

    I weep not for me, but of u so lost
    inside da games dat ameri has tossed
    crossed da mental wit live lies
    hypnotic mesmerized treated lies
    i sit , sit and continue to cry

    When my days come to pass
    i'll depart to where no worries
    a place up somewhere in tis glory
    and look back into yo time
    wit a reality sunshine to strike
    depth of trouble down
    bolts hittin changing frownz

    I only lay now in dis slumber
    inside tis wicked chamber
    sealed by da corner stones
    braced under thy keeps
    i just wanna be freeeeeeee!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a great span between what we deserve in this life, and what we actually receive. Life can be so unjust, makes us tired, and just want to be free of it. I can hear your cry brother.
     
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    Beyond tyme it self we have been delt a bad hand in life
    we as people has been labled and judged upon
    we been hit with every dirty deed humankind can offer
    yet we stand still but inside a struggle and maze of depression
    and against ourselves ...............Da only FREEDOM is Death!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    hopefully that day will come

    when it won't be such a struggle

    and by that i mean

    when man stops making it harder for man to live

    and that freedom can truly be obtained

    peace
     
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    so true so'ja i guess we have become our own fall to Freedom
     
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