Quiet Poetry Lounge : depressed feelings pt. 3

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sheikdadon, Aug 22, 2006.

  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im da ***** dat ppl would hate 2 be
    so many trials n life tired of cats blamin me
    inside im breakin like ****** up bricks
    call me a broke toilet cuz i tote ****
    i feel like my ancestors im enslaved
    im cut up without whips n blades
    aint a alchoholic but i drink everyday
    i live da world u read on this page
    my eyes red cuz of da blood my cuts shed
    tears supressd pain that rome but never left
    no choice but 2 be a deep person
    superficial can never b im 2 busy hurtn
    hatin life n depressing feelings
    want 2 lay it down. quit dealing
    gotta get n pull it 2gether but it fell
    inner demons makin sure im prepared fa hell
    good hygiene but im filthy wit tar n sand
    only excuse cuz ppl keep washin they hands
    im seriously hurtn **** i gotta hide
    look in my face pain is evident in my eyes
    aint no anesthesia for the **** i feel daily
    it didnt kill me but i aint likin wut it made me
    i done did so much dirt cuz of da ills on my mind
    aint a crook but society would give me med time
    always been filled wit hate since i was a yungn
    never no love not for me naww dog no consoling
    im tired of this monotonous ben stine ish
    cant focus btrayed again by some ****
    like a pregnant chick its mornin n im sick
    **** its depressn me so i know u feel it
    dont pacify me n say ud take it away
    cuz i got stocks in pain that i could put on ya tray
    i just want to sleep without da nitemares
    wanna be a female witout feeling inadequate n scared
    its true i dont even feel secure in my own skin
    how da **** could i be abandoned again
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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done and well felt
     
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    deep joint....
    i dunno if these r ur tru feelings
    but that ben stine line had me crackin up...:lol:
    not to be insensitive doe....nice flo

    one love
    khasm
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um.i waz feelin that deep flow rite derr, boi if u didnt kno u was preachin..lol, i can relate 2 dis becuz i go thrugh depression day in and day out, so flow on wit nonstop

    **blackluv and bp**
     
  5. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gwon and spit the spat sheik...deep, real, and killa...just how I like them flows. Do what you do & do it well. Relax Relate & Release:spinstar:

    :dance:

    :picture:
     
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