Black Poetry : Depart

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  1. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    I'M FREE
    Is this how you wanted it to be
    me gone from you
    you gone from me
    Have we always been this way?
    When the times were hot and steamy
    where you always Free to leave me?

    Did your feeling every grow
    grow enough to know
    there was More

    MORE

    than just sex

    MORE

    than just a loves nest

    See It was always More
    more to Us than just Us
    more to Us than just lust
    I thought we were sharing something special
    Our Lives
    as a growing couple
    We built a history
    talked about a furture
    But now
    I'm Free (ha ha)
    have I always been this way
    was it just a game you played

    cuz now you have left me
    Our Friendship
    Our Love
    and never can we BE again
    so yes
    I'm Now and to you Always have been
    !FREE!

    "Sky" :garbage:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free ya mind and the rest will surely follow this was beautifully done
    love the craftmenship of this piece
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *applause*

    I felt sad reading this. I love it when poetry moves me.

    And the ending was really something. I breath this piece in deep... whoa.

    Thank you for sharing this, it is appreciated.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    Many Thanks and Blessings......Glad I could touch your heart like that.....Alot of my writings are kinda on the blue side but I'm not all blue....I just write how I feel and its hard to write happy when your not..... but I'm Cool..... :)Much Luv "Sky"
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sky:
    Tyte write sista.
    Feelin' this joint.

    Much Luv
     
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