Black Poetry : DePart 101

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside yo eyez
    i see a beauty
    of love
    as u smile
    a warm sunshine
    glowz cross the
    skies
    every touch
    we embrace more
    from the depth
    of ya heart
    my soul captures
    i clash before
    with ya love
    and from the mental
    i vision us in the bliss
    of happiness
    but the road fades
    and the path part
    as i journey to a
    new start
    the great windz
    blowing me west
    ya face sit in the south
    the everlasting
    is tasty yet i feed
    on the hopes of
    tomorrow
    the essence of ya
    beings calling me
    beckon me in daily
    i search for reasons
    to answer and fine many
    ya true loving will
    is a rapture it self
    as i place my ego on the
    shelf and pick up my heart
    offer da soul of love
    and bring my body to a close
    soon some day we will meet
    and until i'll watch from
    the west
    REMEMBER ME........
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this stanza is tha bomb, brotha:

    as i place my ego on the
    shelf and pick up my heart


    so is the rest of it. very nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u gempis
    most humble u always touch my soul .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a emotional scribe...
    like the beginning of something
    new within something old
    realizing its true.....but yet
    not sure....i read this like 5 times
    wonderful write poet.....
    well i maybe wrong but
    thats what i got out of it
    Peace Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz for reading
    from da files of two direction
    it's bittersweet pt.2 coming
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome...
    i be lookin for it..
    Peace
     
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    likewise coming in da rare forum
    again thankz for the visit to dis drop
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am a student
    as i sit in
    your class of charms
    i glow more
    wonderful flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    indeed sistah Bluewater pt.2 dropping soon
    thank u for listening to my heart
     
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    Hmmm...not sure what is coming...I guess that's part of the mystery...thought provoking scribe....
     
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