Black Poetry : Denial

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It has suddenly come to me.
    You are not what I want or need.
    The neccesity of you was born
    during one night of passion.
    Passion that was so awe inspiring that
    the simple thought of it causes my
    skin to warm.
    But.
    Still I don't want or need you.
    Even though you make my pulse race
    and occupy my every thought.
    I don't want you.
    See I have things going on in my
    life and you don't fit into my
    program right now.
    I know I wake up and go to sleep
    to the sound of your voice but see
    you are not my cup of tea, my type or
    the one I want in my life.
    So see we need to let this go because I can
    live with out you.

    No I can't
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm

    the many emotins of life......
    I like how you put it down in this one.
    I like the honesty in this piece, especially @ the end
    Nita
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How we'd like to feel versus the way we really feel...liked the way you posed this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime our minds say go but the heart say stay
    the cross path of emotions flowin here express self
    let it all out ......i'm listening and offer these arms .
    flow on sistah Queen
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am glad you all are enjoying it thank you so much.
     
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