Quiet Poetry Lounge : Denial was what I knew!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Royal_T, Jun 24, 2003.

  1. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my Love,

    Like the sun in the morning, I rise from the east.
    I live to give you all my love from your head to your feet.
    I slave for the happiness of your character and your spirit.
    I crave for your soul to dance with angels under the moon.
    I hunger for you exhilaration and blissfulness to come soon.
    I lust to see your smile everyday,
    I yearn to hear the thoughts you say aloud.
    I desire to be the words that you pray that make you proud.

    I long to have you next to me one day.
    And you wonder what else I have to say.

    I want to see your charismatic side.
    I want to see your essence rise.
    I want to see your heart to open wide.

    And while you’re at it, I want to stop the lies
    I want you not to deny . . .

    Me . . . !!!!

    Just realize and visualize that you love me just as much as I love you.


    I put the letter down and looked him in his eyes and I replied,

    “You’re right, I do! I do indeed love you too!”
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!! finding true love on da rebound
    tyte scribe
     
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    that's tight gurl
    the first i love you's are truley cherished
    cause of the emotional intensity
    peace
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My queen, you are the vision
    I love you... truly!
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is deep....
    intriguing and romantic....
    Lovin da flow Royal...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...thank you...rebound love can hurt somebody.

    Khasm....So true. You cherish them and then compare it to all the I Love You's that come to you. It's almost unfair.

    1poet...I'm dark skinned and blushing. You love me...I felt that in my heart....and that's real! Thank you. June 20th..your birthday? That's my sister's birthday. Happy belated sweetheart.

    Play....Thank you so very much. You all find so much in my words sometime. I usually have one way of thinking about something and you all always help me find many more meanings behind my words.

    Tank Ya!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true rebound love can be painful yet joyful too
    it's da heart of one's emotions , da feelings
    and the caring.....u pose a flow to work mindz
    i love it when u flow
     
  8. PloeMorphic

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    I like, I like, Nice flow.
     
  9. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much Love PloeMorphic. I don't see your name much, what's up with that? But aside from that....thank you kindly.
     
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    I slave for the happiness of your character and your spirit
    I want to see your heart to open wide
    Just realize and visualize that you love me just as much as I love you

    the reality of love takes over when we surrender to it, its not an easy thing to do these days but i know that you will excel at it as you do in so many other ways....beautiful piece by a beautiful person...keep the luvstrong:luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :grouphug: :bowdown:
     
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